[sparklefart]

Hello, I just submitted a Jungle Jax guide a day ago, and I hoped to receive notices to improve it. And what are the things that I'm short of.


http://www.solomid.n...jax-build-guide here's the link

This post has been edited by sparklefart: 01 January 2013 - 08:29 AM

[D1eoX]

Look at other approved guides. Tell me what you see as major differences between yours the theirs. I took me a grand total of 3 sec to see that I wouldn't be approve yours. Hint I didn't even have to scroll down.

[sparklefart]

D1eoX, on 01 January 2013 - 09:50 AM, said:

Look at other approved guides. Tell me what you see as major differences between yours the theirs. I took me a grand total of 3 sec to see that I wouldn't be approve yours. Hint I didn't even have to scroll down.

They explain the jungle route thoroughly and explain what item to build for each champion under what kind of circumstances.

[D1eoX]

sparklefart, on 01 January 2013 - 12:33 PM, said:

They explain the jungle route thoroughly and explain what item to build for each champion under what kind of circumstances.

You are still missing some pretty big things.

[sparklefart]

D1eoX, on 01 January 2013 - 01:02 PM, said:

You are still missing some pretty big things.

Hmm, please advise me on what should I do.

[Captain RF12]

Majority of your match-ups are missing. I may want to update that if I were you before doing anything about trying to get it approved.

[sparklefart]

RF12, on 02 January 2013 - 01:55 AM, said:

Majority of your match-ups are missing. I may want to update that if I were you before doing anything about trying to get it approved.

So i should complete my matchups first before submitting?

[Dominus Ensis]

That and add game phase chapters.

[D1eoX]

Dominus Ensis, on 02 January 2013 - 02:37 PM, said:

That and add game phase chapters.

Damnit I was trying to not spell it out for him

[Captain RF12]

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Damnit I was trying to not spell it out for him

Aw, now you're just being mean D1eox

[Dominus Ensis]

Meh. Sorry. Still doesn't mean he knows what goes in those, though . and there's still some other issues outside of those two sections, which I will be notably silent on.

[sparklefart]

Oh thanks a lot! Guys come on, please give me more advice, really need them as its my first time.

[D1eoX]

sparklefart, on 03 January 2013 - 09:35 AM, said:

Oh thanks a lot! Guys come on, please give me more advice, really need them as its my first time.

Granted, but that's no reason to not read the stickies at the top of the sub-forum. In them you will find exactly what we are looking for and y ou'll also run into this little gem: http://www.solomid.n...ric-build-guide

[sparklefart]

D1eoX, on 03 January 2013 - 04:59 PM, said:

Granted, but that's no reason to not read the stickies at the top of the sub-forum. In them you will find exactly what we are looking for and y ou'll also run into this little gem: http://www.solomid.n...ric-build-guide

There's this guide about jungle jax too but it doesn't have matchups but its approved.

[D1eoX]

sparklefart, on 06 January 2013 - 03:08 AM, said:

There's this guide about jungle jax too but it doesn't have matchups but its approved.

Gotta link something if you are going to bring it up my friend. There could be a good reason why it's approved and I don't know until I look at it.

[sparklefart]

D1eoX, on 06 January 2013 - 03:44 AM, said:

Gotta link something if you are going to bring it up my friend. There could be a good reason why it's approved and I don't know until I look at it.

Yeap, this guide. http://www.solomid.n...jax-build-guide

[HomerX]

there is no early/mid/late game or teamfight chapter, there is also a lack of depth in your skills chapters and no skill order chapter.Look at Slater Von Jager's guide on how to make a good one, good enough to send it to approval. http://www.solomid.n...ric-build-guide

[HomerX]

sparklefart, on 06 January 2013 - 03:08 AM, said:

There's this guide about jungle jax too but it doesn't have matchups but its approved.

That guide has much more depth than yours overall, you need more depth.You don't necessairily need matchups for the guide to be approved, specially for a jungle guide.Make sure your guide is different than others in some aspects, guide mods don't approve guides that have the same information than the ones that were already approved.

[Coxy]

Dont whine.

And dont finger point. But teacher, that Jax guide isnt doing it either. Thats how you come off, and most of us have 0 patience for it.

It's outlined, the product is there. The references are there. Its all stickied. Literally droves of approved guides to reference to boot on how yours should look.

Explain to me why I should stop working on my seminary paper to cater to your laziness in not looking at what we have created for you, to answer these exact quiestions.

[D1eoX]

I love you guys so much right now.