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Comments: 4
  • Dalze
    5 months ago
    On the item part, wouldn't that be explained on the Item Builds section? Just wondering. On runes and masteries you mean adding a section with images of them? If so, I didn't think of it and it certainly would be better.

    Alright, I'll try getting images for the Match Ups section.
  • RainDevour
    5 months ago
    Alright to start off, when you use large images in the middle of your sentence (item builds chapter), it becomes very obtrusive. It'd be better to type it out or use small icons. You should also separate the items or add a little small section of the guide dedicated to the item to differentiate what to use, for example:

    [highlight]Ninja Tabi's:[/highlight] You want to get these boots when...

    [highlight]Mercury Treads:[/higlight] It's better to get these boots when...

    In a format like that, it looks more neat and you know where to look for.

    You should add Runes and Masteries for the convenience of the viewers, it helps when you explain them, and they don't have to scroll up.

    I think adding pictures for the machups REALLY helps, it doesn't look right having no pictures.

    BTW: You should just remove the jungling chapter, don't worry about that.
  • Dalze
    6 months ago
    Thank you for responding for my request, I saw now the difference on the item build section you spoke about and have revised and added the chapter to explain, I hope it's good enough.

    The skill order chapter is there, unless it's only me who can see it.

    I'm glad they are fine, I actually tried to go in as deep as I could from what I have experienced in game, I would like to ask what part lacks information so I can work on it :).
  • Slater Von Jäger
    6 months ago
    To start, the initial item build section is not your item build chapter. The chapter for item builds is required. the section you used for it must be short, and used as a basic overview of the items you use, you don't need to explain anything in it.

    you are also missing your skill order chapter.

    As for information, your game phase chapters and team fights chapters are fine, and i applaud you on the work you put into them, your match ups chapter is fine as well. However, the rest of you guide lacks any information, so i ask you to put as much effort into them, as you did the game phase chapters.
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