http://www.solomid.net/guides.php?g=35596-slater-von-j-ger-generic-build-guide

Your guide has almost no detail, doesn't really explain anything, and contains nothing to explain. Read this and act on it before you even think about submitting again or contacting any mods on guide improvement. If you have any questions after reading that, I'll answer them if you PM them to me.

I did not like your guide because i heard you eat an awful lot of mcdonalds before writing them